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Đề 1: hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable
Đề 1: Some people believe that hobbies need to be
difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Sở thích
khó thì mới thú vị.
Some
hobbies are relatively easy, while others present more of a challenge.
Personally, I believe that both types of hobby can be fun, and I therefore
disagree with the statement that hobbies need to be difficult in order to be
enjoyable.
On
the one hand, many people enjoy easy hobbies. One example of an activity that
is easy for most people is swimming. This hobby requires very little equipment,
it is simple to learn, and it is inexpensive. I remember le arning to swim at my
local swimming pool when I was a child, and it never felt like a demanding or
challenging experience. Another hobby that I find easy and fun is photography. In
my opinion,
anyone can take interesting pictures without knowing too much about the
technicalities of operating a camera. Despite being straightforward, taking
photos is a satisfying activity.
On
the other hand, difficult hobbies can sometimes be more exciting. If an
activity is more challenging, we might feel a greater sense of satisfaction
when we manage to do it successfully. For example, film editing is a hobby that
requires a high level of knowledge and expertise. In my case, it took me around two years before I became competent
at this activity, but now I enjoy it much more than I did when I
started.
I believe that many hobbies give us more pleasure when we reach a higher level
of performance because the results are better and the feeling of achievement is
greater.
In
conclusion, simple hobbies can be fun and relaxing, but difficult hobbies can
be
equally
pleasurable for different reasons.
Đề 2: equal
numbers of male and female students
Universities
should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To
what extent do you agree or disagree? Số lượng nam nữ nên bằng nhau.
In
my opinion, men and women should have the same educational opportunities.
However,
I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal proportions of each
gender
in every university subject.
Having
the same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply
unrealistic.
Student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the
institution
receives. If a university decided to fill courses with equal numbers of
males
and females, it would need enough applicants of each gender. In reality,
many
courses are more popular with one gender than the other, and it would not be
practical
to aim for equal proportions. For example, nursing courses tend to attract
more
female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these courses if fifty per
cent
of the places needed to go to males.
Apart
from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be
unfair
to base admission to university courses on gender. Universities should
continue
to select the best candidates for each course according to their
qualifications. In this way, both men and
women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be
successful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a female
student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it would be wrong to
reject her in favour of a male student with
lower grades or
fewer qualifications.
In
conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit, and
it
would
be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on
gender.
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Đề 3: Foreign
visitors should pay more than local visitors
Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors
for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or
disagree with this opinion? Khách quốc tế trả cao hơn khách nội điaj
It
is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than
local
residents to visit important sites and
monuments. I completely disagree with
this
idea.
The argument in favour
of higher prices for foreign tourists would be that cultural
or
historical attractions often depend on state subsidies to keep them going,
which
means
that the resident population already pays money to these sites through the
tax
system. However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view. Foreign tourists
contribute
to the economy of the host country with the money they spend on a wide
range
of goods and services, including food, souvenirs, accommodation and travel.
The
governments and inhabitants of every country should be happy to subsidise
important
tourist sites and encourage people from the rest of the world to visit
them.
If
travellers realised that they would have to pay more to visit historical and
cultural attractions in
a particular nation, they would perhaps decide not to go to
that
country on holiday. To take the UK as an example, the tourism industry and
many
related jobs rely on visitors coming to the country to see places like Windsor
Castle
or Saint Paul’s Cathedral. These two sites charge the same price regardless
of
nationality, and this helps to promote the nation’s cultural heritage. If
overseas
tourists
stopped coming due to higher prices, there would be a risk of insufficient
funding
for the maintenance of these important buildings.
In
conclusion, I believe that every effort should be made to attract tourists from
overseas,
and it would be counterproductive to make them pay more than local
residents.
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Đề 4: only
be concerned with our own communities and countries
We cannot help everyone in the world that needs
help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To
what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Giúp thế giới và giúp
đở cộng đồng nhỏ.
Some
people believe that we should not help people in
other countries as long as there are problems in our own society. I
disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many
people as possible.
On
the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow
citizens. In most communities there are
people who are impoverished or disadvantaged
in some way. It is possible to find homeless people, for example, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are
concerned about this problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time
or give money to support these people. In the
UK, people can help in a variety of ways,
from donating clothing to serving free food in
a soup kitchen. As the
problems are on our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can
understand why some people feel that we should prioritize local charity.
At
the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond our
national borders. In some countries the
problems that people face are much more serious than those in
our own communities, and it is often even easier to help. For example, when
children are dying from curable diseases in
African countries, governments and individuals
in richer countries can save lives simply by
paying
for vaccines that already exist. A small donation to an international charity
might have a much greater impact than helping
in our local area.
In
conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion national
boundaries should not stop us from helping those who
are in need.
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Many people decide on a career path
early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more
satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other
things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life? Xác định nghề
nghiệp sớm.
It
is true that some people know from an early age what career they want to
pursue, and they are happy to spend the rest
of their lives in the same profession. While I accept that this may suit
many people, I believe that others enjoy changing careers or seeking job
satisfaction in different ways.
On
the one hand, having a defined career path can certainly lead to a satisfying
working life. Many people decide as young children what they want to do as
adults, and it gives them a great sense of satisfaction to work towards their
goals and gradually achieve them. For example, many children dream of becoming
doctors, but to realise this ambition they need to gain the relevant
qualifications and undertake years of training. In
my experience, very few people who have qualified as doctors choose to
change career because they find their work so rewarding, and because they have
invested so much time and effort to reach their goal.
On
the other hand, people find happiness in their
working lives in different ways.
Firstly, not everyone dreams of doing a particular job, and it can be
equally rewarding to try a variety of professions; starting out on a completely
new career path can be a reinvigorating experience. Secondly, some people see
their jobs as simply a means of earning money, and they are happy if their
salary is high enough to allow them to enjoy life outside work. Finally, job
satisfaction is often the result of working conditions, rather than the career
itself. For example, a positive working atmosphere, enthusiastic colleagues,
and an inspirational boss can make working life much more satisfying,
regardless of the profession.
In
conclusion, it can certainly be satisfying to pursue a particular career for
the whole of one’s life, but this is by no means the only route to fulfilment.
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Đề
6: all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work
Some
people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their
free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a
whole.
Do
you agree or disagree?
Many
young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for
both
the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we should
therefore
force all teenagers to do unpaid work.
Most
young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without
being
given the added responsibility of working in
their spare time. School is just
as
demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework
and
exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. When young people do
have
some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to
spend
it doing sports and other leisure activities. They have many years of work
ahead
of them when they finish their studies.
At
the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging
young
people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would
argue that it goes against the
values
of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against
their
will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who
would
feel that they were being used, and parents, who would not want to be told
how
to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is
surely
the best system.
In
conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my
opinion
we should not make this compulsory.
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Nowadays
animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the
safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be
banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are
in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity.
Discuss
both views and give your own opinion.
It
is true that medicines and other products are routinely tested on animals
before
they
are cleared for human use. While I tend towards the viewpoint that animal
testing
is morally wrong, I would have to support a limited amount of animal
experimentation
for the development of medicines.
On
the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against animal experimentation.
To
use a common example of this practice, laboratory mice may be given an illness
so
that the effectiveness of a new drug can be measured. Opponents of such
research
argue that humans have no right to subject animals to this kind of trauma,
and
that the lives of all creatures should be respected. They believe that the
benefits
to humans do not justify the suffering caused, and that scientists should
use
alternative methods of research.
On
the other hand, reliable alternatives to animal experimentation may not always
be
available. Supporters of the use of animals in
medical research believe that a
certain
amount of suffering on the part of mice or rats can be justified if human
lives
are saved. They argue that opponents of such research might feel differently
if
a member of their own families needed a medical treatment that had been
developed
through the use of animal experimentation. Personally, I agree with the
banning
of animal testing for non-medical products, but I feel that it may be a
necessary
evil where new drugs and medical procedures are concerned.
In
conclusion, it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban testing on
animals for
vital
medical research until equally effective alternatives have been developed.
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Đề 8: governments should give financial support to creative artists
Some people think that governments
should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and
musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative
sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People
have different views about the funding of creative artists. While some
people
disagree with the idea of government support for artists, I believe that
money
for art projects should come from both governments and other sources.
Some
art projects definitely require help from the state. In the UK, there are many
works of art in public
spaces, such as streets
or squares in city centres. In
Liverpool,
for example, there are several new statues and
sculptures in the docks
area of the city,
which has been redeveloped recently. These artworks represent
culture,
heritage and history. They serve to educate people about the city, and act
as
landmarks or talking points for visitors and tourists. Governments and local
councils
should pay creative artists to produce this kind of art, because without
their
funding our cities would be much less interesting and attractive.
On
the other hand, I can understand the arguments against government funding for
art.
The main reason for this view is that governments have more important
concerns.
For example, state budgets need to be spent on education, healthcare,
infrastructure
and security, among other areas. These public services are vital for a
country
to function properly, whereas the work of
creative artists, even in public
places, is a luxury.
Another reason for this opinion is that artists do a job like any
other
professional, and they should therefore earn their own money by selling their
work.
In
conclusion, there are good reasons why artists should rely on alternative
sources
of
financial support, but in my opinion government help is sometimes necessary.
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Đề 9: languages are in danger of extinction
Several
languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small
numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money
on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money.
Discuss
both these views and give your opinion.
It
is true that some minority languages may
disappear in the near future. Although
it
can be argued that governments could save money by allowing this to happen, I
believe
that these languages should be protected and preserved.
There
are several reasons why saving minority languages could be seen as a waste
of
money. Firstly, if a language is only spoken by a small number of people,
expensive
education programmes will be needed to make sure that more people
learn
it, and the state will have to pay for facilities, teachers and marketing. This
money
might be better spent on other public services. Secondly, it would be much
cheaper
and more efficient for countries to have just one language. Governments
could
cut all kinds of costs related to communicating with each minority group.
Despite
the above arguments, I believe that governments should try to preserve
languages
that are less widely spoken. A language is much more than simply a
means
of communication; it has a vital connection with the cultural identity of the
people
who speak it. If a language disappears, a whole way of life will disappear
with
it, and we will lose the rich cultural diversity that makes societies more
interesting.
By spending money to protect minority languages, governments can
also
preserve traditions, customs and behaviours that are part of a country’s
history.
In
conclusion, it may save money in the short
term if we allow minority languages
to
disappear, but in the long term this would have an extremely negative impact on
our
cultural heritage.
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Some
people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while
others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views
and give you own opinion.
People
have different views about the role and function of museums. In my
opinion,
museums can and should be both entertaining and educational.
On
the one hand, it can be argued that the main role of a museum is to entertain.
Museums
are tourist attractions, and their aim is to exhibit a collection of
interesting
objects that many people will want to see. The average visitor may
become
bored if he or she has to read or listen to too much educational content, so
museums
often put more of an emphasis on enjoyment rather than learning. This
type
of museum is designed to be visually spectacular , and may have interactive
activities
or even games as part of its exhibitions.
On
the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on education.
The
aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did not
previously
know. Usually this means that the history behind the museum’s exhibits
needs
to be explained, and this can be done in
various ways. Some museums
employ
professional guides to talk to their visitors, while other museums offer
headsets
so that visitors can listen to detailed commentary about the exhibition. In
this
way, museums can play an important role in teaching people about history,
culture,
science and many other aspects of life.
In
conclusion, it seems to me that a good museum should be able to offer an
interesting,
enjoyable and educational experience so that people can have fun and
learn
something at the same time.
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Đề 11: traditional music of a
country vs international music
There are many different types of music in the world
today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more
important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
It
is true that a rich variety of musical styles can be found around the world.
Music is a vital part of all human cultures for a range of reasons, and I would
argue that traditional music is more important than modern, international
music.
Music
is something that accompanies all of us throughout our lives. As children, we
are taught songs by our parents and teachers as a means of learning language,
or simply as a form of enjoyment. Children
delight in singing with others, and it would appear that the act of singing in a group creates a
connection between participants, regardless of their age. Later in life, people’s musical preferences develop, and we come to
see our favourite songs as part of our life stories. Music both expresses and arouses emotions in a way that words alone
cannot. In short, it is difficult to imagine life without it.
In
my opinion, traditional music should be valued over the international music
that has become so popular. International pop music is often catchy and fun,
but it is essentially a commercial product that is marketed and sold by
business people. Traditional music, by contrast, expresses the culture, customs
and history of a country. Traditional styles, such as ...(example)..., connect
us to the past and form part of our cultural identity. It would be a real pity
if pop music became so predominant that these national styles disappeared.
In
conclusion, music is a necessary part of human existence, and I believe that
traditional music should be given more importance than international music.
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Đề 12: get
a job straight after school or take a gap
Some people believe that studying at university or
college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it
is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your
opinion. (Học đại học hay đi làm sau khi high school.)
When they finish school, teenagers face
the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there
are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it
is better to go to college or university.
The option to start work straight after
school is attractive for several reasons. Many young people want to start
earning money as soon as possible. In this way,
they can become independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or
start a family. In terms of their career,
young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may
progress more quickly. They will have the chance to
gain
real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession.
This may lead to promotions and a successful career.
On the other hand, I believe that it is
more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Firstly, academic qualifications
are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become a
doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result,
university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they
tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer
qualifications.
Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes
there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people
who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to
compete.
For the reasons mentioned above, it
seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if
they continue their studies beyond school level.
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Nowadays
the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people
make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
It
is true that new technologies have had an influence on communication between
people.
Technology has affected relationships in various ways, and in my opinion
there
are both positive and negative effects.
Technology
has had an impact on relationships in business, education and social
life.
Firstly, telephones and the Internet allow business people in different countries
to
interact without ever meeting each other. Secondly, services like Skype create
new
possibilities for relationships between students and teachers. For example, a
student
can now take video lessons with a teacher in a different city or
country.
Finally, many people use social networks, like Facebook, to make new
friends
and find people who share common interests, and they interact through
their
computers rather than face to face.
On
the one hand, these developments can be extremely positive. Cooperation
between
people in different countries was much more difficult when
communication
was limited to written letters or telegrams. Nowadays, interactions
by
email, phone or video are almost as good as face-to-face meetings, and many of
us
benefit from these interactions, either in work or social contexts. On the
other
hand,
the availability of new communication technologies can also have the result
of
isolating people and discouraging real interaction. For example, many young
people
choose to make friends online rather than mixing with their peers in the real
world,
and these ‘virtual’ relationships are a poor substitute for real friendships.
In
conclusion, technology has certainly revolutionised communication between
people,
but not all of the outcomes of this revolution have been positive.
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Đề 14: video
games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool
Some
people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational
tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect
on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games
outweigh the benefits?
Many
people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I
accept
that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe
that
they are more likely to have a harmful impact.
On
the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Users, or
gamers,
are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and
engaging
than real-life pastimes. From an educational perspective, these games
encourage
imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking
and
problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the gaming context.
Furthermore,
it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve
users’
motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such as flying a
plane.
However,
I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks.
Gaming
can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new
targets
and frequent rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend hours
each
day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score
than
their friends. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of
sleep
to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on
the
computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked
in
part
to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming
addiction.
In
conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more
significant
than the possible benefits.
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Đề 15: average life expectancy is increasing
In
the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will
this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be
taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
It
is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than
ever
before.
Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this
trend,
societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
As
people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older,
several
related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that there will
obviously
be more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a
pension.
The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and
governments
will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the
population.
In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for
working
adults. Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare,
and
the fact young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly
relatives.
There
are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems
described
above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age
for
working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be
healthy
enough to continue a productive working life. A second measure would be
for
governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the number of
working
adults who pay taxes. Finally, money from national budgets will need to
be
taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and
transport
facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens.
In
conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are
certain
to
arise as the populations of countries grow older.
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Explain
some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these
problems? What can individual people do?
Humans
are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we can also
take
steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet. This essay wi ll
discuss
environmental problems and the measures that governments and
individuals
can take to address these problems.
Two
of the biggest threats to the environment are air pollution and waste. Gas
emissions
from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming,
which
may have a devastating effect on the planet in the future. As the human
population
increases, we are also producing ever greater quantities of waste, which
contaminates
the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans.
Governments
could certainly make more effort to reduce air pollution. They could
introduce
laws to limit emissions from factories or to force companies to use
renewable
energy from solar, wind or water power. They could also impose ‘green
taxes’
on drivers and airline companies. In this way, people would be encouraged
to
use public transport and to take fewer flights abroad, therefore reducing
emissions.
Individuals
should also take responsibility for the impact they have on the
environment.
They can take public transport rather than driving, choose products
with
less packaging, and recycle as much as possible. Most supermarkets now
provide
reusable bags for shoppers as well as ‘banks’ for recycling glass, plastic
and
paper in their car parks. By reusing and recycling, we can help to reduce
waste.
In
conclusion, both national governments and individuals must play their part in
looking
after the environment.
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Đề 17: Define
country's
success
Economic
progress is often used to measure a country's success. However, some people
believe that other factors are more important. What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's
success? Do you think one factor is more important than others?
The
relative success of different countries is usually defined in economic terms.
There
are several other factors, apart from the economy, that could be used to
assess
a country, and in my opinion education is the most important of all.
Standards
of education, health and individual human rights should certainly be
considered
when measuring a country’s status. A good education system is vital for
the
development of any nation, with schools, colleges and universities bearing the
responsibility
for the quality of future generations of workers. Healthcare provision
is
also an indicator of the standard of living within a country, and this can be
measured
by looking at average life expectancy rates or availability of medical
services.
Finally, human rights and levels of equality could be taken into account.
For
example, a country in which women do not have the same opportunities as
men
might be considered less successful than a country with better gender equality.
In
my view, a country’s education system should be seen as the most important
indicator
of its success and level of development. This is because educ ation has a
considerable
effect on the other two factors mentioned above. It affects people’s
health
in the sense that doctors and nurses need to be trained, and scientists need to
be
educated to the highest levels before they can carry out medical research. It
also
affects
the economy in the sense that a well-educated workforce will allow a
variety
of companies and industries to flourish, leading to trade with other
countries,
and increased wealth.
In
conclusion, nations can be assessed and compared in a variety of ways, but I
would argue that the standard of a country's education system is the best
measure of its uccess.
(288
words, band 9)
Đề 18: relationship
between equality and personal
achievement
In
recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between
equality
and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can
achieve
more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal
achievement
are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according
to
their individual merits. What is your view of the relationship between equality
and personal success?
In
my opinion, an egalitarian society is one in which everyone has the same rights
and
the same opportunities. I completely agree that people can achieve more in this
kind
of society.
Education
is an important factor with regard to personal success in life. I believe
that
all children should have access to free schooling, and higher education should
be
either free or affordable for all those who chose to pursue a university
degree. In
a
society without free schooling or affordable higher education, only children
and
young
adults from wealthier families would have access to the best learning
opportunities,
and they would therefore be better prepared for the job market. This
kind
of inequality would ensure the success of some but harm the prospects of
others.
I
would argue that equal rights and opportunities are not in conflict with
people’s
freedom
to succeed or fail. In other words, equality does not mean that people lose
their
motivation to succeed, or that they are not allowed to fail. On the contrary, I
believe
that most people would feel more motivated to work hard and reach their
potential
if they thought that they lived in a fair society. Those who did not make
the
same effort would know that they had wasted their opportunity. Inequality, on
the
other hand, would be more likely to demotivate people because they would
know
that the odds of success were stacked in favour of those from privileged
backgrounds.
In
conclusion, it seems to me that there is a positive relationship between
equality
and
personal success.
(260
words)
Many museums and
historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people.
Why is this the case
and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
Bài mẫu Band 8.0 cho đề Task 2 tuần này: 07/02/2015 đến
từ IPP IELTS
Tourists are generally
drawn to museums and historical locations when visiting new countries. However,
records have shown local people’s low attendance at these attractions. Some
explanations will be put forward before solutions can be drawn to tackle this
problem.
There are several reasons as to why tourists, instead of the local people, come to museums and historical places. First, these locations can provide visitors with a comprehensive overview of the traditions in the particular locality they are situated. As a result, such destinations are generally more appealing to the newcomers than to the locals, those without the need to familiarise themselves with the traditional values of the region. Moreover, because the layout of museums and historical houses is likely to remain unchanged through years, they can be visually unattractive to the local inhabitants, who may have been to these sites for at least once in their younger years.
Several measures can be prompted to promote locals’ attendance rate at buildings for historic relics and museums. The main solution is to change the public’s perception of such places as sites for only monotonous activities. Should civic events including weddings, anniversaries and concerts be allowed to be held in these locations, they would attract substantial public attention to historical values. Another resolution is that historians and preservationists should be featured more frequently on the media, with their articles on the tremendous worth of museums and historical remains.
To conclude, historical areas and museums can be uninteresting for local citizens because they can be too familiar with the culture that these places depict. To better this, there should be more media coverage on historical assets, and also more open-door policies to use such locations as spots for more public-oriented activities.
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1. many traditional values and customs
have been lost
People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our lives
generally more comfortable but many traditional values and customs have been
lost and this is a pity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In our contemporary life, people
are trying to earn as much money as they can to buy more things. It is argued that these
things have created a chance for people to have a comfortable life. However,
it is unfortunate that many traditional values and customs have also been lost
on the way. This
essay will take a closer look at the issue. (63 words)
There are some traditional values which are in danger of being lost.
One of them is the bond of the family. People in a family nowadays do not spend
time having lunch or dinner together. Most of the time is spent on working and
studying in order to acquire some social status. A delicious meal with the
whole family is being replaced by fast food, and hardly does every body in a
family have enough time to listen to each other. (81 words)
Some customs are also being lost because the majority of the young generation have
been focusing on lastest things. Music is a good example of this. while the elder like
listening to Cai Luong, the younger want to listen to pop, rock music. Some of the
adolescents even do not have any knowledge of Cai Luong. What this
will lead to is that Cai Luong will naturally not exist in the future. (71
words)
In conclusion, if the subject like ‘the value of protecting the
cultural identities’ is taught at both school and family, it will affect the young
generation and we still can have a comfortable life without losing any thing.
(38 words) TOTAL: 253
2. Globalization
affects the world’s economies
Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a positive
way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.
In the present age,
globalization is playing
an increasingly important role in our lives. But in the meantime
whether it is a blessing or a curse has sparked a heated debate.
Some people argue that globalization has a fundamentally beneficial influence on our
lives, while many others contend that it has a detrimental effect as well.
A convincing argument can be made about globalization not
only
playing a pivotal role in the development of technology and economy, but also
promoting the cultural exchange between different countries. To start with,
it is the globalization that impelled many corporate to become an international
group, thereby making a contribution to the local technology and employment. Specifically,
when a multinational group establish a factory in a developing country, the new
equipment, the new management skills and the job vacancies are all in the best
interest of the local society. Moreover, people worldwide can get to know
each other better through globalization. It is easy to see that more and more Hollywood
blockbusters show cultures different from American, some recent examples are
‘Kungfu Panda’ and ‘The Mummy’.
Admittedly, profit driven globalization
has severely affected young people. Today, in the metropolises in different
countries, it is very common to see teenagers wearing NIKE T-shirts and Adidas
footwear, playing Hip-Hop music on Apple iPods and eating at KFC. The culture that took a thousand
years to form just seems similar in these cities; it is looks like
you can only distinguish them by their language. Meanwhile, in some developing countries, sweat
workshops are always a concerning issue. For instance, reports show that some teenagers
employed by NIKE’s contractors work in smelly factories over 14 hours a day,
but are only paid fifty cents per hour.
In summary,
I would concede that globalization does come with some adverse effects. Despite that fact, benefits created by it far outweigh
the disadvantages. Overall, I am convinced that we should further promote
globalization and meanwhile the local government should take measures to combat
culture assimilation and sweat workshops.
3. get
a job straight after school
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best
route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a
job straight after school. Discuss both
views and give your opinion.
When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job
or continue
their education. While
there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it
is better to go to college or university.
The option to start work
straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young people want
to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become independent, and
they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their
career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue
their studies, may progress more quickly. They will have the chance to gain
real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to
promotions and a successful career.
On the other hand, I
believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Firstly,
academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to
become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result,
university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they
tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly,
the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are
hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not
have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete.
For the
reasons mentioned above, it seems to me
that students are more likely to be successful in their careers
if they continue their studies beyond school level.(271 words, band 9)
4. equal numbers of male and
female students
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in
every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In my opinion, men and
women should have the same educational opportunities. However, I do not agree with the
idea of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every
university subject.
Having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply
unrealistic. Student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the
institution receives. If a university decided to fill courses with equal
numbers of males and females, it would need enough applicants of each gender.
In reality, many courses are more popular with one gender than the other, and
it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions. For example, nursing courses
tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these
courses if fifty per cent of the places needed to go to males.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed
above, I also believe that it would be unfair to base admission to
university courses on gender. Universities should continue to select the best
candidates for each course according to their qualifications. In this way,
both men and women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they
will be successful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a
female student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it would be wrong
to reject her in favour of a male student with lower grades or fewer
qualifications.
In conclusion, the
selection of university students should be based on merit, and it would be both
impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender.
(265 words, band 9)
5. museums should be
enjoyable places or education
Some
people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while
others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views
and give you own opinion.
People have different views about the role and function of museums. In my opinion, museums can and should be both
entertaining and
educational.
On the one hand, it can be argued that the
main role of a museum is to entertain. Museums are tourist
attractions, and their aim is to exhibit a collection of interesting objects
that many people will want to see. The average visitor may become bored if he or
she has to read or listen to too much educational content, so museums often put
more of an
emphasis on enjoyment rather than learning. This type of museum is designed to be
visually spectacular, and may have interactive activities or even games as part
of its exhibitions.
On the other hand, some
people argue that museums should focus on education. The aim of any exhibition should be
to teach visitors something that they did not previously know. Usually this means
that the history behind the museum’s exhibits needs to be explained,
and this can be done in various ways. Some museums employ professional guides
to talk to their visitors, while other museums offer headsets so that visitors
can listen to detailed commentary about the exhibition. In this way, museums can play an
important role in teaching people about history, culture, science and many
other aspects of life.
In conclusion, it seems to
me that a good museum should be able to offer an interesting, enjoyable and
educational experience so that people can have fun and learn something at the
same time.
(253 words, band 9)
6. minority languages
Several languages are in
danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people.
Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these
languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both
these views and give your opinion.
It is true that some minority
languages may disappear in the near future. Although it can be argued that
governments could save money by allowing this to happen, I believe
that these languages should be protected and preserved.
There are several reasons why saving minority languages could be seen as a waste of money. Firstly,
if a language is only spoken by a small number of people, expensive education
programmes will
be needed to make sure that more people learn it, and the state will
have to pay for facilities, teachers and marketing. This money might be better spent on other
public services. Secondly,
it would be
much cheaper and more efficient for countries to have just one language.
Governments could cut all kinds of costs related to communicating with each minority
group.
Despite the above arguments, I
believe that governments should try to preserve languages that are less widely
spoken. A language is much more than simply a means of communication; it has a vital
connection with the cultural identity of the people who speak it. If a
language disappears, a
whole way of life will disappear with it, and we will lose the rich
cultural diversity that makes societies more interesting. By spending money
to protect minority languages, governments can also preserve traditions,
customs and behaviours that are part of a country’s history.
In conclusion, it may
save money in the short term if we allow minority languages to disappear, but in the long term this
would have an extremely negative impact on our cultural heritage.
(258 words)
7. humans are damaging the
environment
Explain some of the ways in which humans are
damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems?
What can individual people do?
Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we
can also take
steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet. This essay
will discuss environmental
problems
and the measures
that governments and individuals can take to address these problems.
Two of the biggest threats to the environment are
air pollution and waste. Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes
from vehicles lead
to global warming, which may have a devastating effect on the planet in the
future. As the
human population increases, we are also producing ever greater quantities of
waste, which contaminates the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans.
Governments could certainly make more effort to
reduce air pollution. They could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories or to force
companies to use renewable energy from solar, wind or water power. They could also impose
‘green taxes’ on drivers and airline companies. In this way, people would be
encouraged to use public transport and to take fewer flights abroad,
therefore reducing emissions.
Individuals should also take responsibility for the impact they have on the environment. They can take public
transport rather than
driving, choose products with less packaging, and recycle as much as
possible. Most supermarkets now provide reusable bags for shoppers as
well as ‘banks’ for recycling glass, plastic and paper in their car parks. By
reusing and
recycling, we can help to reduce waste.
In conclusion, both national governments and
individuals must play their part in looking after the environment.
8. spent on space exploration
TEST 5 - Task 2 With all the troubles in the
world today, money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. The money
could be better spent on other things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that vast amounts are spent on
space exploration for apparently little gain while people suffer from terrible poverty
around the world.
Supporters of space
programs say that space exploration has brought inventions to the world that we
would not have had. The
famous example
is non-stick pans! Supporters also point out that it is in human
nature to strive to discover the unknown and that we can progress in all ways by
unlocking the secrets of the stars. These are all valid points.
On the other hand how can we as human beings justify
the billions of dollars spent sending people into space so we can have
non-stick pans while millions of people around the world are dying of disease and
famine? With the money spent on space exploration, wells could be dug,
farmland could be developed, medicine could be bought, schools and colleges
could be built, and teachers, doctors and nurses could be trained. Even if we
could justify
money on exploration, wouldn‛t it be better to spend the money on exploring the
sea on our own planet that could offer enough food to provide for the entire world?
From what I have said in this essay it would
seem that I would agree that money should be spent on better things than space exploration.
However, this is
not the case. I understand all the reasons for spending money on better
things but I also strongly believe that it is necessary that the human race should
continually strive to develop our technology and broaden our horizons. The money in the long
run is well spent on space exploration.
9. Money cannot buy happiness
"Money cannot buy happiness" it is often
claimed. But with money you can buy most of the things that are necessary for
happiness: good food, accommodation, entertainment, travel, quality health
care. No wonder most people want to make as much money as possible. Do you
agree or disagree?
The saying that money cannot buy happiness has many opponents.
They claim that with the help of money it is possible to get the things that constitute happiness, such as delicious food, beautiful house, travel etc.
Therefore, it is understandable why people do their best to earn as much as possible. While money
can contribute to the happiness of those for who material wealth is paramount, for those who
have other priorities money cannot buy happiness.
Money can give great satisfaction and feeling of happiness to
people, who place high value on material possessions. Having expensive cars, spacious and stylish apartments, good food and all the recent
achievements of technology in entertainment is a must for these people. Without these attributes of wealthy life, they might feel inferior, insecure and sometimes morbidly depressed.
However, there are people who put a
different meaning into
the word "happiness". They see happiness in healthy and friendly relations with their families, friends and
those who are dear to them. Money cannot buy good relationships. Consequently, it cannot buy
happiness for those who hold friendly interaction with people as a priority.
Yet, there are other people, who believe that the only way to true happiness is spiritual paths and not through
material possessions
or loving relationships. They believe that the aim of our human existence is to become as
fully human as possible,
to realise the full potential inherent in the human condition. Money is
considered by them only as means of survival in this world and does not have to do
anything with happiness.
In brief, happiness means different things to different
people. Therefore, it can make only those people happy, who see material
wealth as a main component of happiness.
10 non-academic subjects
TEST – 1 Task 2 With
the pressures on today’s young people to succeed academically, some people
believe that non-academic subjects at school (eg: physical education and
cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate
wholly on academic subjects. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
Education is very important for children and it plays
a major role in the today's world. Some people think that, children
should study only academic subjects at school to succed academically. On the other hand, some think
that non academic subjects very important and they should not be removed from the
syllabus because they are important for the development of personality. Therefore accademic
and nonacademic subjects are essential to achieve success in the life.
First of all
,non-academic subjects proviade a lots of benefits to the children.Non-academic
subjects such as physical education, cookery, music and dance. Sports are very
important for children. Sports makes children mentally and physically active.
Children will
be active ane healthy all the time. Otherwise they will be unfit and
they will get obesity. Sports are necessary for children's growth, for their
bones and for their personality development.
Second of all, nonacademic subjects are best way to relax their mind and body. Young people can develop many good hobbies like playing music and
dancing. Parents and teachers should encourage students to enhance
their knowledge in these subjects. Moreover, every child cannot become a doctor
or an engineer. Some children will be good in academic and some will be in non
academic. Parents should encourage to study both the subjects.
However, some people think that,
children should study only academic subjects and they should concentrate wholly
only on academic subjects. Therefore parents and teachers pressurise
children to study only academic subjects. It will be very stressful to
children. It would
lead failure and childeren leave school too early because of too
much tension and pressure.
To sum, children should study academic and non-acadenic subjects at
school and they should be included
in syllabus to develop better individul and better personality. Rounded education
is very important for children to achieve success in the life.
12 non-academic subjects at school
With the pressures on today’s young people to succeed academically, some
people believe that non-academic subjects at school (eg: physical education and
cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate
wholly on academic subjects.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
TEST – 1
Task 2 What young
people should study at school has long been (1) the subject of intense
debate and this is a question that certainly does not (1)have one
correct answer.
We (2) need to provide young people (3) the best possible chance
of doing well at school. In traditional curriculum there is (4) a wide
variety of subjects with a mix of academic and non-academic subjects. In this
way a young person is (5) formed with a rounded education. Non-academic subjects would
include sports, cooking, woodwork and metalwork. I believe this is (6) the best
form of education. A young person should learn things other than academic
subjects. Sport is particularly important. Young people (7) have to learn to love sport
so that they can (8) be fit and healthy later in life. If not we will (9) be
raising an obese and unfit generation.
(10) I totally understand the point of view
that education is so important that students must be (11) pushed as hard as possible to achieve
their best. (12) It sounds a good idea to only expose the students to academic
subjects as then they can(13) spend all
of their school hours on studying areas that will get them into university and
good jobs later in life. I just (14) feel a more rounded education would produce
a better individual. We must remember too that a lot of people, maybe even most
people, (15) aren‛t academically minded and would benefit more from (16) a more
vocationally based education. Forcing academic studies onto them (17) would
lead to failure and the student leaving school too early.
Therefore I agree that although (17) a wholly
academic curriculum would suit and benefit some young people, I believe that
for most students non-academic subjects are important inclusions still in
today‛s syllabuses.
Question 11: Internet has dramatically altered
Question
11 The Internet: The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past
few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall
effect of this technology has been positive.
Model Answer A: IELTS Band 5
There are various
different opinions on the subject of the Internet. While some people might
suggest that it has negatively affected our lives and society, I personally
believe that it has actually made the world a much better place. In my opinion,
there are two main benefits to this technology.
Firstly, I am sure most people would agree that the
Internet has improved the way we communicate. Although spending too much time
using the Internet instead of talking to real people can cause social
isolation, most of us have benefited greatly from e-mail and internet chat
programs like MSN Messenger. There useful and powerful communication tools have
made it much faster, easier and cheaper to keep in touch with family and
friends in other countries (and also to do international business).
In addition to this, the Internet provides us with
all of the information in the world at work, school and home. In the past,
research involved spending many hours in the library. Now, however, the same information
is available online. Of course, not all of the material on the Internet is
offensive and some of it is dangerous – there is everything from pornography to
instructions on how to make bombs.
Nevertheless, I feel that this free movement and
sharing of information has generally been beneficial. To conclude, I once again
restate my view that the Internet has had a positive influence on modern life
because of its effects on both communication and the flow of information. (259
words)
Model Answer B: IELTS Band 7
The Internet
has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years. Yet, there
remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology
has been positive or negative. While there are certainly valid arguments to the
contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the Internet far outweigh
its drawbacks. These benefits are twofold.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the
Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate. Despite the risk of social
isolation – a problem occasionally seen in people who spend too much time at
their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world – most
of us have benefited greatly from e-mail and internet chat programs like MSN
Messenger. These incredibly useful and powerful tools of communication
facilitate both contact with loved ones in faraway places and global trade.
Equally importantly, though, the Internet has placed
the entire word (and all of the information in it) at our fingertips. In earlier
times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves. Now,
however, the same information can be accessed at the click of a button.
Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet is reliable or
helpful – there is a vast amount of material online that some would consider
offensive or dangerous, ranging from pornography to instructions on how to make
bombs.
Nonetheless, I would contend that this free flow of
information has generally been a very positive development. By way of
conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the Internet has had a
positive impact on modern life because of its influence on communication and
the flow of information (272 words
Question 12 Fast Food:
Fast
food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular.
Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your
opinions in this?
Model Answer A: IELTS Band 5+
There are various different perspectives on the
issue of fast food. Some people believe that this kind of food has a positive
role to play in the world because of its convenience and low cost; however, I
would argue that it is harmful both to the people who eat it and to society at
large. There are two main reasons for this
Firstly, it is a well-known fact that eating too
much fast food is extremely unhealthy. Foods such as fried chicken, hamburgers
and chips contain a great deal of fat and salt, which cause major health
problems like high blood pressure, obesity and heart disease, although I
certainly agree that fast food is both cheap and convenient, the illnesses it
causes when we get older are very expensive and it is the taxpayer who often
has to pay for this treatment
In addition to this, many fast food restaurants
advertise to children in order to influence their future eating habits. The
McDonalds clown is a good example of this kind of advertising. Ronald
McDonald’s bright clothes and smile are clearly designed to attract the
attention of children, who then push their parents to take them to McDonalds. I
believe the restaurant does this because it feels that children who grow up
eating in McDonalds also provides playgrounds and holds children’s birthday
parties to get busy parents through the door
In conclusion, I once again restate my view that
fast food has a negative effect on our lives because of the health programs it
causes and the way that fast food chains try to change the eating habits of
children. (278 words
Model Answer B: Ielts Band 7+
The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in
the availability of fast food. Some laud its convenience and relatively low
cost; however, in this essay I intend to argue that this kind of food is
detrimental both to the individuals that consume it and to society at large.
There are two primary reasons for this.
First of all, it is an undeniable fact that
consuming fast food to excess results in serious health problems. Foods such as
fried chicken, hamburgers and chips – which are incredibly high in fat and salt
are responsible for such ailments as high blood pressure, obesity and heart
disease. Moreover, although I certainly agree that fast food is both affordable
and convenient, the cost and inconvenience of treating the illnesses it causes
in later life are significant. In other words, while fast food is beneficial in
the short term, its long-term effects are generally negative.
Further and even more importantly, though, some fast
food chains deliberately attempt to attract children in order to shape their
future eating habits. One particularly good example of this is the character
Ronald McDonald the bright clothes and smile of the McDonalds clown are a
beacon to children. Having grown up eating in McDonalds restaurants, people are
likely to continue eating there throughout their adult lives. It is also
interesting to note that McDonalds provides playgrounds and frequently holds
children’s birthday parties in order to attract young children and their
parents.
By way of conclusion, I believe that fast food will
continue to become more popular as the pace of life increases. Given the health
risks associated with this trend, I believe that public education campaigns
warning people about the dangers of fast food would be warranted (288 words.
Question 13
International Tourism:
International
tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive
trend, while others do not. What are your opinions on this?
MODEL ANSWER a: IELTS band 5+
International tourism has increased considerably in
the last 50 years. While this industry has certainly created a great deal of
wealthy for many destination countries, I believe that it has actually caused
far more problems than it has solved. The following are just two of the main
difficulties involved with international tourism.
One particularly serious issue is that international
travel has brought western problems to developing countries. Only wealthy
people can afford to travel overseas. As a result, increasing numbers of
tourists from rich( mostly western ) countries now holiday in poorer countries
like Thailand and Indonesia. In many of these places, this flood of tourists is
closely associated with such problems as prostitution, alcoholism and drug
abuse. Although international tourism can certainly bring people together and
create greater cross-cultural understanding, this will probably not happen
while it is still such a powerful sign of western power and lack of moral
standards.
Even more worrying, however, is the damage that
international tourism has caused to the environment in many parts of the world.
Australia’s great Barrier Reef is an especially good example of this – large
areas of coral reef have been slowly destroyed by the thousands of boats, scuba
divers and snorkelers that have visited it over the years. Likewise, Bali’s
famous Kuta Beach is now often covered in litter from the crowds who go there.
In order to maintain such tourist attractions, I feel we must regulate
international tourism more carefully.
To conclude, it is clear that the difficulties
created by the growing international tourist trade are complicated and many.
While they are certainly not impossible to overcome, I believe these problems
will probably continue for some time. ( 278 words.)
Model Answer B : 7+
The past 50 years have seen a considerable increase
in global tourism. Despite the undeniable economic prosperity it has brought to
many host countries, I would argue that the overall impact of international
holiday making has in fact been negative. Two of the primary drawbacks
associated with this trend are as follows.
First of all, global tourism tends to export many
negative aspects of western culture. Since it is only the wealthy who can
afford to travel abroad, developing countries like Thailand and Indonesia have
become the playgrounds of tourists from more affluent ones. In many such
nations, this influx of mainly western tourists has brought with it problems
such as prostitution as well as alcoholism and drug abuse. Admittedly,
international tourism does have the potential to foster greater understanding
and tolerance between people of different cultures. However, this is unlikely
to occur while it remains such a potent symbol of western cultural domination
and moral decadence.
Even more disturbing, though, is the environmental
degradation that international tourism has caused in many parts of the world.
One particularly salient example of this is Great Barrier Reef in Australia –
the countless boats, divers and snorkellers that have visited the reef over the
past few decades have gradually destroyed vast sections of coral. Similarly,
world renowned Kuta Beach in Bali has become heavily polluted in recent years.
In order to be sustainable, greater regulation of global tourism is required.
In conclusion, the challenges presented by the booming
international tourist industry are numerous and complex. Although they are by
no means insurmountable, it is highly unlikely that they will be resolved in
the foreseeable future. (272 words
QUESTION 14 IMMIGRATION:
Nowadays,
more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to
become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should
abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you
agree or disagree?
Model Answer A: IELTS Band 5+
There are a variety of different opinions on whether
or not immigrants should change their behavior to fit in with their new
country. Although some people would no doubt disagree, I personally believe
that newcomers should indeed try to adapt. In my view, this means following
both the written laws and social customs of their adopted country. There are
two primary reasons for this.
Firstly, it is obvious that society would not
function properly if newcomers did not obey the law. One particularly good example
of this is road rules – image what would happen if people refused to drive on
the same side of the road. Thus, it is necessary for immigrants to make sure
that they obey the law in their new country even if laws in their home country
are different. Two other examples of things which are allowed in some countries
but illegal in others are owning a gun and gambling.
Secondly, it is important to remember that societies
are built on shared values. The social rules of a country are the glues that
keep it together, so immigrants must respect them. Certainly, having many
different cultures makes a country more interesting; however, I would argue
that too much difference weakens a society by making people feel that they do
not belong there. I believe that similarities between people bring them
together, while their differences pull them apart. A healthy society is a
society with strong sense of unity.
In conclusion, I once again restate my belief that
new immigrants to a country must try to adjust to local rules of behavior. As
the old saying goes: “When in Rome, do as the Romans do” (280 words)
Model Answer B: IELTS Band 7+
These days, it seems that more people are migrating
to other countries than ever before. This raise certain question about the
integration of newcomers into society. Although there are valid arguments to
the contrary, in this paper I will argue that it is the responsibility of
immigrants to adapt to accepted rules of behavior in their adopted country,
both written and unwritten. The reasons for this are twofold.
Firstly, it is vitally important that newcomers
observe the laws of their adopted country for the sake of social order. Imagine
the chaos that would ensure if people refused to drive on the same side of the
road. It is, therefore, necessary for all-immigrants to ensure that they
observe the law in their new country regardless of any differences to laws in
their home country. Two further instances of practices which are permitted in
some countries but prohibited in others are the possession of firearms and
gambling.
Secondly and more importantly, though, in order to
maintain societal cohesion it is essential that newcomers respect the social
norms of their adopted country. Of course, having a mixture of different
cultures and traditions gives a country color and vibrancy; however, I would
contend that too much cultural diversity undermines a society by alienating
people from each other. It is my belief that similarities unite people, whereas
differences have a tendency to divide. A strong society is a homogenous society
with shared values and goals.
By way of conclusion, I believe that this issue is
likely to become even more important in the future as border between countries
become increasingly blurred. It, therefore, demands out further consideration.
(273 words
QUESTION 15 Jobs
and Gender:
Men and women are different in terms of their
characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by
men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?
Model Answer A: IELTS Band 5+
There are a variety of different perspectives on the
question of whether or not men and women are equally good at all jobs. Although
many people still believe that some kinds of work should only be done by
females and other kinds by males, it is my argument that both men and women are
able to do any job well. There are two main reason for this.
Firstly, I would argue that traditional ideas about
men and women are not always right. It is certainly true that there are
characteristics that are typically male and others which are typically female;
however, not everybody is typical. Not every woman is physically weak, in the
same way that not every man is a poor communicator – traditional gender roles
do not fit everybody. A man who wants to do a job normally performed by women
or a woman who wants to work in a male – dominated industry should be given the
chance to demonstrate his/ her ability.
Furthermore, I feel that having both male and female
employees in a workplace creates a sense of balance. The two sexes often,
though certainly not always, do things differently. Instead of seeing these
differences as weaknesses, I believe that we should view them as chances to
find new ways of doing things and thus improve the way we work. Therefore, a
person’s weak point can be turned into strengths.
To conclude, for the reasons stated above I maintain
that men and women can do any job equally well and that a person’s individual
ability is far more important than their sex in this regard. (266 words)
Model Answer A: IELTS Band 7+
These days, it seems that more women are entering
“male occupations” than ever before and vice versa. While some still hold to
the conservative view that certain jobs are better performed by men and others
by women, it is my personal belief that people of their sex are capable of
doing any job effectively. The reasons for my position are as follows.
First of all, I believe it is a mistake to base our
views on broad generalisations about the characteristics of men and women as
such stereotypes are often inaccurate. Although there are certainly traits
which are typical of men and others which are typical of women, there are
exceptions to every rule. Not all women are physically weak, just as not all
men are poor interpersonal communicators; conventional gender roles are not
appropriate for everybody. If a man and woman desires to pursue a career which
is traditionally reserved for the opposite sex, I believe he/ she should be
provided the opportunity to prove him/ herself capable. Secondly, I would
contend that the presence of both males and females in a workplace brings a
sense of balance. Men and women frequently, though by no means always, have
different methods of doing things. Rather than judging these differences to be
weakness, I feel that we should view them as opportunities for innovation and
the discovery of more effective and efficient work practices. A person’s
weakness can thus be transformed into strengths.
In summary, I once again reaffirm my position that
both male and female employees are an asset to any industry and as our
stereotypes about men and women are not always appropriate, we must not
discourage anyone from choosing an occupation simply because of his/ her
gender. (285 words
Question 16 Cigarette
Smoking:
Smoking
is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In
the interest of the public heath, governments should ban cigarettes and other
tobacco products.Do you agree or disagree?
There are range of different views on the question of
whether tobacco should be banned or not. Some people would argue that smoking
is a personal choice and that introducing laws to prevent people form smoking
would be repressive. However, I feel that tobacco should indeed be made
illegal. There are two main reasons for this.
----Firstly,
it is important to remember that tobacco is actually a drug. Most countries
around the world have strict laws against selling or using recreational drugs.
Therefore, if governments want to consistent in the way they handle the problem
of drug abuse, I believe they must ban tobacco as well. This is especially true
considering the fact that many drugs which are now illegal, such heroin and
marijuana, could be used by doctors to treat various real medical problems.
-----On the other hand, tobacco is useless. Further
and even more importantly, though, smoking should be banned for the sake of
public health. It is a proven fact that smoking causes serious illnesses, such
as lung cancer and heart disease. Although cigarette companies and pro-smoking
groups may claim that people have the right to decide what to put into their
own bodies, I would argue that the rights of society are more important than
those of the individual. The medical treatment smokers need when they get sick
is often very expensive , and it is usually governments and society who pay the
bill. Thus, I believe that anti-smoking laws would be a good idea.
To conclude,
although governments will probably not ban tobacco in the near future, I feel
this should be the long-term goal as there are few habits as pointless and
destructive as smoking
(283 word)
There are widely differing views on the issue of
whether tobacco should be banned or not. Some people would suggest that it is
their right to smoke and that prohibiting cigarettes would be a violation of
their civil liberties; however, I personally believe that tobacco should indeed
be made illegal. There are two principal reasons for this.
One point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal
is the fact that tobacco is a drug. The majority of governments around the
world take a prohibitionist approach to the problem of substance abuse. If the
governments wish to be consistent in pursuing their “war on drug”, therefore, I
believe they must ban tobacco as well. This is particularly so given the fact
that many currently illicit drugs – including heroin and marijuana - have
legitimate medical applications, while tobacco has none.
However, perhaps the strongest argument in favour of
banning cigarettes and other tobacco products is that of public health. It is
irrefutable fact that smoking leads to lung cancer and other such potentially
fatal diseases. Pro-smoking groups would no doubt argue that each individual
has the right to determine what goes into his/her own body. Nevertheless, I
would suggest that the interests and rights of society at large must override
those of the individual. The medical treatment that smokers require is often
incredibly costly, and it is frequently governments and society that cover
these costs rather than the individual smoker. Hence, I feel laws prohibiting
smoking would be entirely justified.
In reality, of course, the widespread prohibition of
smoking is unlikely in the near future. However, given the seriousness of the
problems that it causes, I believe that this should be the ultimate goal. (282
word)
Question 17 Endangered
Species:
Trying
to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable
resources. Do you agree or disagree?
The question of whether nor not we should try to
save endangered species is definitely a controversial one. Although some people
argue that these animals are not useful and we should let them die in the same
way that many others (like the dinosaurs ) have die out before, I personally
believe that endangered species are actually worth saving. There tow main
reasons for this.
First of all, it is important for us to recognise
the key role that endangered species play in nature. The environment is made is
for fragile ecosystems, where plans and animals all rely on one another to
survive. If one animal disappear or a new one is introduced, it upsets the
balance of nature and affects other animals above and below it tin the food
chain by changing the environment that they live in. These changes often come
back to affect us in ways that we do not expect. In the same way that rabbits
introduced Australia by the British now eat the plants that many native animals
need to live and ruin farmer’s crops, the extinction of a predatory animal
would allow its prey to reproduce out of control and would probably cause
plagues. Thus, because environment change is actually a danger to us, we
clearly have an interest in saving endangered species.
======However, maybe the strongest argument for
saving endangered species is that all life is valuable in and of itself. Even
of these animals do not have any practical use, they should still be saved.
Furthermore, because human activity has destroyed the natural living
environment of many endangered species, we should do the best we can to save
them.
To conclude, i feel that endangered animal are
indeed worth saving. They not only their own value, but the balance of nature
would be disturbed if that died out. ( 311 word)
The issue of whether we should attempt to save
endangered species from extinction or not is certainly a contentious one.
Despite the arguments of some people that such animals serve no useful purpose
and should be allowed to die out just as many others ( including the dinosaurs
) have in the past, it is my personal belief that they should in fact be
preserved. Two of the principal reasons for this are as follows.
====Firstly, it is vital that we appreciate the
importance of endangered species on maintaining the balance of nature.
Ecosystems are delicate arrangements where plants and animals all depend on
each other for survival. The disappearance or introduction of any animal
species disrupts the balance and negatively impacts upon other plants and
animals by breaking the food chain and altering the habitat in which they live.
Such imbalances frequently returns to haunt us in unexpected ways. Just as
rabbits that were introduced to Australia soon after European settlement now
compete with native species for food and destroy farmer’s crops, the extinction
of a predator can cause plagues by following its prey to multiply unchecked.
Therefore, since ecological change constitutes a potential risk to us and our
environment, it is clearly in our own interest to protect endangered species.
====Yet, perhaps the strongest argument in favour of
preserving endangered species is that all life has intrinsic value; even if
endangered species are not useful to us in any practical way they should be
preserved nevertheless. Further, given that humans are responsible for destroying
the natural habitat of many endangered animals, we should make every possible
effort to save them. In conclusion, i once again restate any view that saving
endangered species is worthwhile. Not only do they help to maintain balance of
nature, but they also have value in and if themselves. ( 305 words
Discuss : Causes and
effects / and Solutions:
Question 18 Rural depopulation:
These
days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to
live in the city. Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation (migration
from the country to the city ) and suggest some ways on which this trend could
be reversed.
Rural depopulation is a very important issue in many
parts of the world today. In this essay, I will discuss some of the main effects
of this problem and also offer some possible solutions to it.
Firstly, it is clear that migration away from the
country negatively affects life in the city. Serious environmental and social
problems often occur when cities become overcrowded. Problems such as air,
water and noise pollution are increasing common in urban areas around the world
because there are simply too many people living there. Pollution can make city
life very uncomfortable indeed and can even cause illness. Beijing is a very good
example of this. Overcrowding in cities can also lead high unemployment
(especially in poorer parts of the world) and crime.
In order to prevent people from moving away from the
country and reduce the size of cities, I feel we make country life more attractive.
In my view, the best way of doing this would be to improve services in the
country. One of the main reasons that so many people have left the country is
that facilities like shopping centres, cinemas, swimming pools, restaurants,
libraries, schools and hospitals are generally batter in the city. If such
facilities were available in the country, more people would choose to live
there. Another effective solution would be for the government to subsidies
businesses and workers who move the country.
In conclusion, I believe we must all recognise how
serious this problem is. For the sake of the environment and our own quality of
life it is vital that we preserve rural communities. ( 271 word
While country towns were once vibrant and growing
places, these days many appear to be dying as people move to the city in search
of work and excitement. In this essay, I intend to discuss the impact of this
problem as well as how more people could be encouraged to live in the rural
areas.
===Surprisingly, the most serious consequences of
rural depopulation are often felt in urban areas. As a result of overcrowding,
cities throughout the word today are increasing prone to environment problems
like air, water and noise pollution. Beijing is a particularly good example of
this. Further, the uncontrolled growth of cities also gives rise to social
problems such as high unemployment, crime and in less affluent countries, the
creation of slums. Clearly, there is a limit to how many people can live in one
area before living standards are negatively influenced.
=== In order to stem the tide of rural depopulation,
I believe we must first address its root causes. At the heart of the matter is
the disparity between services and facilities in the country and those in the
city. I firmly believe that urban and rural dwellers alike would find the idea
of country life far more appealing if high quality shopping centres, cinemas,
swimming pools, restaurants, libraries, schools and hospitals were more readily
available in the country. One further method of attracting people to the
country would be for government to provide financial incentives to business and
professional workers who willingly relocate to rural areas.
====In reality, this problem is unlikely to be
resolved in the short term. However, it is by no means insurmountable, and I am
convinced that more people will choose the country as city life becomes less
comfortable and more expensive. ( 291 word
Question 19 Distance
within Modern Families:
With
divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally
accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be. Discuss the
causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.
Lack of communication and closeness between family
members is a vitally important issue in many societies today. In this essay, I
will firstly discuss the causes of this problem and then offer some possible
solutions to it.
====In my view, the primary cause of this problem is
the modern lifestyle. Most parents today work much harder than ever before. In
the past, one parent – usually the mother – stayed at home to take care of the
children. In recent times, however, it has become increasingly common for both
parents to work. As a result, more and more children now grow up with neither
parent at home. It is unsurprising, then, that families are no longer as close
as they once were. One other factor adding to this problem is that people today
spend too much time on solitary activities like watching television.
==In order to overcome this problem and make
families closer, people’s lifestyle must change. I feel more parents should
stay at home and take care their children. Perhaps governments could subsidise
parents who choose to look after their families rather than working. Of course,
these subsidise would probably not fully cover the income a family would reduce
the financial pain of surviving on one income and afford to do so. Another
positive step would be to promote active pastimes through public education
programmes.
====To conclude, while it is improbable that any
solution will be found in the near future, I feel that the abovementioned
measures would be a good first step. (280 word Divorce
and family breakdown were virtually unheard of just 100 years ago. Now,
however, almost half of all marriages fail. This phenomenon is symptomatic of
the growing distance between family members in modern society. In this essay, I
intend to explore the sources of this problem along with some possible
solutions to it.
=====Chief among the causes of this problem is the
modern lifestyle. Today’s parents have to work harder than those of previous
generations to support their families. Traditionally, one parent assumed the
role of breadwinner, while the other – typically the mother – acted as the
homemaker. Recently, though, double income families have become the norm.
Consequently, an increasing number of children now grow up in a parentless
environment. Little wonder, then, that they feel alienated. Another
contributing factor is the passive and solitary nature of many modern forms of
entertainment.
====== In order to resolve this sense of alienation
within families, I believe we must first address its root causes. Perhaps the
most effective method of doing this would be for governments to offer financial
incentives to parents who choose to remain at home and take care of their
families. Admittedly, such incentives would probably not fully compensate
couples for lost income; however, they would at least soften the hardship of
living on a single income and provide an alternative for parents who would
rather remain at home but are unable to do so because of financial constraints.
One further measure would be to promote more interactive leisure activities in
the community through public education campaigns. In conclusion, I believe that
this is clearly a problem of such complexity that no solution is likely in the
short term. However, I believe that the measures outlined above would
constitute a good first step. (292 word
Question 20 Declining Educational
Standards:
Many
people believe that educational standards have declined in recent times,
particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the causes of this
problem and offer some possible solutions to it
This issue of falling educational standards is of
great importance in the world today. In this essay, I will briefly discuss some
of the main causes of this problem and also offer some possible solutions to
it.
In my view, one of the main reasons for poor quality
education is that school students are not disciplined properly. In the past,
teachers could smack or cane children who misbehaved. Now, however, this kind
of punishment is not allowed and many teachers are losing control of their
students as a result. If student do not listen, teachers cannot teach and
learning becomes impossible. Clearly, discipline must be restored if we are to
improve educational standards. Of course, there are many other ways to
discipline children; however, I would argue that physical punishment is still the
most effective method.
====Another reason for poor reading, writing and
mathematical skills among students today is that many schools waste too much
time teaching “soft” subjects like music, art and drama. These subjects are
certainly interesting. However, they tend to distract students from more
important subjects like mathematics and English. The more time a student spends
learning how to paint, the less time they spend learning how to read. Thus, in
order to improve basic literacy and numeracy, I would argue that schools should
focus their attention on core subjects.
======In conclusion, this is such a complex problem
that I don’t believe any real solution will be found in the near future.
However, I am convinced that the steps mentioned above would be helpful. (258
word)
Band 7
There is a widely held perception in many parts of
the world today that educational standards are in decline. In the following
essay, I aim to identify the sources of this problem as well as some viable
solutions to it.
====From my perspective, one of the most significant
obstacles to learning in schools today is lack of discipline. While the
teachers of previous generations were able to maintain order through the use of
corporal punishment, such methods are no longer permitted. This has left many
teachers powerless to control unruly students. The resultant misbehaviour and
inattention on the part of students seriously undermines the learning process.
If educational standards are to be raised, therefore, it is crucial that
classroom discipline be restored. Admittedly, there are numerous alternatives
to corporal punishment, which is frowned upon by many these days. Nonetheless,
I remain firmly convinced that physical forms of punishment are often the most
effective method of behaviour management.
======Another major contributing factor in the
sub-standard academic achievement of today’s students is the undue attention
that many schools give to “soft” subjects like music, art and drama.
Interesting though they may be, these subjects simply serve to distract
students from more important and practical subjects like mathematics and
English. The more time a student spends learning how to paint, for instance,
the less time they spend learning how to read. In order to improve educational
outcomes, therefore, we must ensure that core subjects are not neglected.
======In reality, of course, this is a vast
oversimplification of the issue. Solutions such as the reintroduction of
corporal punishment would be problematic in themselves. However, I believe that
the hard way is sometimes the best way. (281 words
Popular events like the Football World Cup and other
international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension
and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
Every four years, the whole world stops to watch
international sporting events such as the Olympics and the Football World Cup
in which athletes show their best performance to make their country proud.
These sporting occasions have proved to be helpful in easing international
tension in difficult times when powerful leaders were trying to control the
world’s economy and other governments were fighting over the land.
The Olympic Games are one of the best examples which
prove how sporting events can bring nations together, at least temporarily.
From the ancient History, when Greeks and Romans would interrupt battles to
participate in the games, to the more recent international disputes, when
athletes from Palestine and Israel would forget their differences, compete
peacefully and even embrace each other after an event. Moreover, these popular
events have called the world’s attention to the terrible consequences of wars;
thus some leaders have tried to reach agreements to end their disputes and live
peacefully.
Similarly, international sporting events show
benefits in some developing countries which live in a daily internal civil war.
For example, Brazil has a high rate of unemployment, lack of education, hunger,
crime, poverty and corruption which leads to an immense embarrassment of being
Brazilian and a low self-esteem. However, when the Football World Cup starts,
the Brazilian squad, which is considered the best team in the world, provokes
an amazing feeling of pride in their country. Most people seem to forget all
their problems and even the criminal activity decreases. They paint roads with
the national colors, wear the Brazilian team shirts and buy national flags.
Moreover, the competition brings families and neighbors together and even rival
gangs watch the games and celebrate peacefully.
In conclusion, popular sporting events play an
important role in decreasing international tensions and liberating patriotic
feelings as history has shown.
(1) vast amounts are spent on
(2) suffer from terrible poverty
around
(3) brought inventions
(4) point out that it is in
human nature to strive to discover
(5) unlocking the secrets of
the stars.
(7) spent sending people
(8) are dying of disease and
famine
(9) wells could be dug
(10) medicine could be bought
(12) exploring the sea on our
own planet
(13) offer enough food to
provide for the entire world?
(14) From what I have said in
this essay it would seem that I would agree that
(15) understand all the reasons
for spending money on better things
(16) The money in the long run
(1) the subject of intense
debate
(1)have one correct answer
(2) need to provide
(3) the best possible chance of
doing well
(4) a wide variety of subjects
with
(5) formed with a rounded
education
(6) the best form of education
(7) have to learn to love sport
(8) be fit and healthy later in
life
(9) be raising an obese and unfit
generation.
(10) I totally understand the
point of view that education
(12) It sounds a good idea to
only expose
(13) spend all of their school hours on
studying areas
(14) feel a more rounded
education
(15) aren‛t academically minded
(17) would lead to failure
(16) a more vocationally based
education
(17) a wholly academic curriculum
8.
the range of option offered by the AIS
9. the type of athletes who can attend the AIS
10. future guidance for the AIS students.
11. the effect the AIS has had on Australia's sporting
achievements.
12. the world-wide recognition of the AIS
13. the reason for establishing the AIS
NO MORE THREE WORDS
1. When did Scott go to the South Pole?
2. How
much fish do Norwegians eat in a year?
3.
What colour are the shells of Leghorn eggs?
4. What types of ịinjury did Scott's men suffer from?
5. What three important things does wholemeal bread
contain?
A-H ABOUT FOOD
6.
something that happend during a famous trip
7.
the amounts of a certain food that are eaten by
people from different countries.
8. how the air affects a certain food item
9. a product that has a sweet taste
10. some research that took place
11. a belief that some people have about food
WHICH TWO EXTRACTS MENTION
12. different types of the same food products
13. an unusal way of measuring what humans cosume
14. more than one types of food
The issue of ………… is very important
for all countries
On the one hand, the community
service combine several positives.
On the other hand, when the crimes
are very serious or are recidives, it is better the criminal to be isolated in
the prison.
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Topic
:
"In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake
community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people
who have committed a crime should be sent to prison."
"In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake
community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people
who have committed a crime should be sent to prison."
Essay ( Written by Irina)
The issue of crime punishment is very important for all countries. In some of them being in prison as a punishment for a crime is substituted with working for the community, especially for the less significant crimes. Some people consider this for correct, having in mind the benefits of that, whilst others believe that criminals should go in a prison to repay their crimes.In my opinion undertaking community service is very clever way for punishment and it collects in itsself not only social but also economical reasons.
On the one hand, the community service combine several positives. (câu chính hoạt động cộng đồng có nhiều tích cực). To start with, the criminals with less serious crimes will sleep, eat, (tội phạm với ít trọng tội sẽ ăn ngủ giống ở nhà, tiết kiệm tiền phạt) having their hygiene at their homes, which means that will save much money for taxpayers. Next, the criminals will work for free for the community, respectively, it will be a repaiment for their crime. Moreover, the community service could have even educational effect - for example a criminal working in a hospital will learn more for health and diseases. In addition,for some young offenders it could be important for their career.
On
the other hand, when the crimes are very serious or are recidives, it is better
the criminal to be isolated in the prison. First of all, it is very importanmt
for prevention to the next crime. There is a high possibility the criminal to run out, if it is
not in the prison, as well to commit a new crime. Secondly, the harsh regimen
could reform the way of thinking and behaving of the offenders. Another
important benefit is the real restriction in the prison ,which will keep the the victims or their relatives calm, sedcure and
satisfied.
In conclusion, resticting the criminal in prison or working in community service have their places in the system of criminal punishment. I think that the community services are for light and unsignifficant crimes ,but when the crime is serious, it is better the offender to be in the prison.
In many countries, sports and exercise classes are replaced with the academic subjects. Discuss the effects of this trend.
model answer:
Over the past few decades, academic subjects have become increasingly important in this fast-changing information-based society. Nowadays, there has been a growing debate as to whether it would be more effective to replace physical education classes with academic subjects. Despite the importance of sports, I highly believe that it is inevitable and more efficient to focus more on academic subjects for several reasons.
Those who argue that sports and exercise classes are needed in school base their case on the following arguments. First of all, sports are a good way to build character and develop personality. That is, there are necessary for learning about competition, cooperation, and good sportsmanship. In addition, as a majority of children these days are addicted to the Internet, they find it hard to leave their computer. Consequently, a growing number of children are becoming overweight or obese due to a lack of exercise. So, if schools foster an environment that deprives students of getting a proper physical education, it will have a long-term negative effect on children both mentally and physically.
Nevertheless, people should not ignore the fact that devoting more time and energy to academic subjects will benefit students more in the long run. The time devoted to physical education now would be better spent teaching students English. This is because speaking fluent English will give young people an advantage over other college applicants and job seekers in the near future. Besides, science will undoubtedly benefit youth more than physical education as well. The principles learned in science will provide the necessary foundation for solving and difficult problems that are sure to arise in students' futures.
In summary, there are high hopes that educators and parents exercise wisdom in teaching young generations.
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Topic
" Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the
way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer."
Essay (written by Ravi )
In today's mechanical world, because of hectic schedules and word load people
are tending towards the types of food which can be prepared quickly and easily.
Now a days, food producing companies are making people's job of cooking food
easier. However, besides improving the life of people they are also having some
disadvantages as well. This will be discussed further by providing relevant examples.
To begin with, the number of facilities available today such as electric cookers,
grinders and nonstick pans has improved the way people used to prepare food in
the past. Also, the increasing production of ready made food such as noodles and
ingredients made the people’s life better.
On the other hand, variety of frozen food such as chopped vegetables and
barbeque chicken reduced the amount of time people used to spend in chopping
and marinating food items. Thus, it is believed that food preparation is no longer a
hassle for people.
On the contrary, using electric equipment such as ovens and microwaves in
cooking food have deteriorated people’s health. In addition to this, frozen food
such as chicken, sea food and other vegetables are contributing to develop some
forms of ulcers in people. Thus, it can be understood that using easier methods of
food preparation may not be safe all the time.
In conclusion, by reviewing the facts and supporting evidences provided above it
can be understandable that, safe and balanced food preparation is always
recommended. Though, there are some facilities which may be comfortable,
people should choose the best ways of preparing food which should be easy and
healthier for their families.
" Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the
way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer."
Essay (written by Ravi )
In today's mechanical world, because of hectic schedules and word load people
are tending towards the types of food which can be prepared quickly and easily.
Now a days, food producing companies are making people's job of cooking food
easier. However, besides improving the life of people they are also having some
disadvantages as well. This will be discussed further by providing relevant examples.
To begin with, the number of facilities available today such as electric cookers,
grinders and nonstick pans has improved the way people used to prepare food in
the past. Also, the increasing production of ready made food such as noodles and
ingredients made the people’s life better.
On the other hand, variety of frozen food such as chopped vegetables and
barbeque chicken reduced the amount of time people used to spend in chopping
and marinating food items. Thus, it is believed that food preparation is no longer a
hassle for people.
On the contrary, using electric equipment such as ovens and microwaves in
cooking food have deteriorated people’s health. In addition to this, frozen food
such as chicken, sea food and other vegetables are contributing to develop some
forms of ulcers in people. Thus, it can be understood that using easier methods of
food preparation may not be safe all the time.
In conclusion, by reviewing the facts and supporting evidences provided above it
can be understandable that, safe and balanced food preparation is always
recommended. Though, there are some facilities which may be comfortable,
people should choose the best ways of preparing food which should be easy and
healthier for their families.
Evaluated by IELTS
Trainer 05
Advice
to the student:
·
Try to use rich vocabulary to make your writing more attractive.
·
No spelling mistakes noticed. Good job done.
·
Use active voice when you write essay.
·
Ensure that you meet the minimum word limit of 300 words. If the
word limit was
more than 300 ,then your writing can qualify for IELTS score of 7 in writing
section.
more than 300 ,then your writing can qualify for IELTS score of 7 in writing
section.
Topic:
"As a country develops in technology, many traditional skills and trades die out.
Some believe that this is natural and it is not a good idea to try and preserve
these traditional skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this
opinion?"
Essay ( Written by Irina)
In the past, traditional skills and trades were essential for people to survive and to
feed themselves and their families. Nowadays , the advancing technology and
science are reasons more and more trades and skills to lose their importance and
application .Some people consider this process as normal ,whilst others fight to
prolong the life of the trades . The process of gradual extinction of the trades is
natural.However , those skills schould be preserved as a part of our historical
inheritance and because they present diversity .
To start with, there is a trend for some trades to die out or to become less
applicable in real life. For example ,nobody produces bronze hunting instruments
today ,also very rarely is it possible to meet a cobbler manually producing shoes.
Next , there are some crafts which are preserved ,but not in their original format
.For instance , people still create jewelry by hands ,but they are successful in
that ,adding elements of new technologies .A good supporting example could be
the use new materials,production process or even computers for creating of
jewelry.Moreover ,it is clear that this process of decline through the time is
natural. The future is for more effective ,less time consuming ,easier etc way of
production.
On the other hand , despite the fact that future needs increased and
sophisticated production, it is important to preserve the state of former crafts
and skills unchanged,because they are part of our history .For example , most of
modern children have never seen the process of weaving carpets .However ,if
those skills are well preserved , pupils could see that in real or in
museums.Furthermore , preserving the skills and trades will increase people`s
range of skills and knowledge.
In conclusion, although the decline of trades is inevitable due to the new
technology development, it is important these crucial skills to be saved for the
future generations.In my opinion they will be a lesson of history for them and a
sign of abundance in the world of ideas and abilities.
"As a country develops in technology, many traditional skills and trades die out.
Some believe that this is natural and it is not a good idea to try and preserve
these traditional skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this
opinion?"
Essay ( Written by Irina)
In the past, traditional skills and trades were essential for people to survive and to
feed themselves and their families. Nowadays , the advancing technology and
science are reasons more and more trades and skills to lose their importance and
application .Some people consider this process as normal ,whilst others fight to
prolong the life of the trades . The process of gradual extinction of the trades is
natural.However , those skills schould be preserved as a part of our historical
inheritance and because they present diversity .
To start with, there is a trend for some trades to die out or to become less
applicable in real life. For example ,nobody produces bronze hunting instruments
today ,also very rarely is it possible to meet a cobbler manually producing shoes.
Next , there are some crafts which are preserved ,but not in their original format
.For instance , people still create jewelry by hands ,but they are successful in
that ,adding elements of new technologies .A good supporting example could be
the use new materials,production process or even computers for creating of
jewelry.Moreover ,it is clear that this process of decline through the time is
natural. The future is for more effective ,less time consuming ,easier etc way of
production.
On the other hand , despite the fact that future needs increased and
sophisticated production, it is important to preserve the state of former crafts
and skills unchanged,because they are part of our history .For example , most of
modern children have never seen the process of weaving carpets .However ,if
those skills are well preserved , pupils could see that in real or in
museums.Furthermore , preserving the skills and trades will increase people`s
range of skills and knowledge.
In conclusion, although the decline of trades is inevitable due to the new
technology development, it is important these crucial skills to be saved for the
future generations.In my opinion they will be a lesson of history for them and a
sign of abundance in the world of ideas and abilities.
Evaluated by IELTS
Trainer 06
IELTS Band score rating
for essay : 6.5
Advice
to the student:
·
Try to avoid spelling mistakes.
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Avoid excessive use of 'next' , 'example','former','latter'.
·
Reduce the number of words in a sentence. Keep the limit as 8-10
words.
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3rd paragraph needs to be reviewed.
·
Use proper vocabulary to express and enrich your essay.
Let’s
break down a good paragraph to illustrate what we mean in the last post.
Suppose
one part of the task question is:
“Describe the disadvantages of using air freight to transport goods around the world.”
“Describe the disadvantages of using air freight to transport goods around the world.”
Here
is an example paragraph:
Unfortunately,
the use of air freight has a number of important disadvantages with two of the
most significant being expense in terms of money and damage to the environment.
To begin with, although air freight is fast, the most
obvious disadvantage is that it costs a lot of money to ship goods by
air as opposed to sending them
by ship or rail. This
cost is usually passed on to the consumer, making a business less
competitive. While this
financial disadvantage is significant, the environment also
suffers enormously. For example, exhaust
gases from planes pollute the air, adding green-house gases and other pollutants
to the atmosphere, and aircraft also create noise
pollution around airports, which makes
life uncomfortable for people who must live
in close proximity to them.
(128 words)
(128 words)
Analysis:
The
paragraph is a detailed answer which raises two main issues and briefly
supports each main point.
First
sentence describes what the paragraph is about (it is the topic sentence).
“To begin with…” is good linking; “..although air freight..” is a subordinate clause structure (band 6 and higher require these types of sentences); “This cost…” ‘this’ provides a reference and link to the previous sentence; “making a business…” is a participle phrase (a reduced relative clause ‘which makes a business ..’) providing a variety of sentence structures, which is necessary for Band 7; “While this financial disadvantage …” another subordinate clause structure and the word “this” provides a reference to the expense in the previous sentence (reference like this is necessary to be awarded band 6 and higher); “environment also suffers …” ‘also’ is a linking word that adds an additional example and links ideas coherently and logically; “adding green-house gases …” is a participle phrase structure, (a reduced relative clause – ‘which adds green-house ….’), which provides variety to sentence structures, which is needed to get higher than Band 6; “which makes life uncomfortable…” and “who must live in close…” are both relative clause structures, which are required to get band 6 and higher.
“To begin with…” is good linking; “..although air freight..” is a subordinate clause structure (band 6 and higher require these types of sentences); “This cost…” ‘this’ provides a reference and link to the previous sentence; “making a business…” is a participle phrase (a reduced relative clause ‘which makes a business ..’) providing a variety of sentence structures, which is necessary for Band 7; “While this financial disadvantage …” another subordinate clause structure and the word “this” provides a reference to the expense in the previous sentence (reference like this is necessary to be awarded band 6 and higher); “environment also suffers …” ‘also’ is a linking word that adds an additional example and links ideas coherently and logically; “adding green-house gases …” is a participle phrase structure, (a reduced relative clause – ‘which adds green-house ….’), which provides variety to sentence structures, which is needed to get higher than Band 6; “which makes life uncomfortable…” and “who must live in close…” are both relative clause structures, which are required to get band 6 and higher.
In
short, a wide variety of sentence structures including complex sentence
structures is used and according to the Public band Descriptors Band 7 requires
“…a variety of complex structures”.
Sentence
grammar is frequently correct (in fact, it is always correct), which is the
requirement for Band 7 according to the Public Band Descriptors. Band 7 does
not require the grammar to be perfect but in the words of the Public band
Descriptors it requires “frequent error-free sentences”.
There
are many good examples of accurate vocab that is less common: “to ship goods by
air”; “as opposed to”; “passed on to”; “the consumer”; “making a business less
competitive”; “financial disadvantage”; “environment also suffers enormously”;
“exhaust gases”; “pollute the air”; “green-house gases”; “noise pollution”;
“makes life uncomfortable”; “live in close proximity”. The vocabulary shows the
use of style and collocation (being able to use combinations of words) which
are both required to achieve Band 7 according to the Public Band Descriptors.
In
fact this paragraph would score Band 9, so a Band 7 does not have to be this
good. The important thing is to understand WHY this is a good paragraph and
then aim to introduce some of the same things into your own writing. The more
positive aspects you can introduce the better chance you have for a higher
score.
Study
this post carefully – there is a lot of information here. Achieving Band 7 is a
difficult area to explain when not face-to-face with my students but hopefully
this example paragraph will help you understand what I was talking about in the
last post about answering the question and structuring the paragraph.
Part
of a Task Question:
Why do people use private cars for transport?
Why do people use private cars for transport?
In
this case you don’t have to make a question because the task topic is a
question.
Begin
with the topic sentence, the first sentence of the paragraph that describes
what the paragraph is about (here you will write about why people use private
cars). An example topic sentence would be:
“To begin with, there are a
number of important reasons why people prefer to use private cars to get
around.”
So why do people use private
cars? Here
are some ideas.
Convenient.
Why is it convenient: because public transport doesn’t go everywhere; because
public transport doesn’t work all the time; because it avoids dangers; because
public transport is crowded and sometimes dirty.
This
is enough; we don’t have to think more. In fact, we don’t even need all these
ideas!
So
here is a paragraph:
“To
begin with, there are a number of important reasons why people prefer to use
private cars to get around. One of the most important is convenience. For
example, while public transport is cheap, it does not go everywhere, which
means using public transport always leads to having to walk to the final destination. Furthermore, public
transport doesn’t function all the time, most importantly, late at night. This
can result in exposure to danger when it is necessary to walk. Although using
private cars is more expensive, it avoids these serious problems.” (92
words)
This
paragraph only has one main point: it is convenient. Importantly, it also has
three minor supports, can go anywhere, can travel anytime and avoid dangers.
